Sun abdicates  

MulleenofMelb 53M
2300 posts
7/18/2016 7:08 am

Last Read:
7/19/2016 5:00 am

Sun abdicates


Sun abdicates
Sun abdicates its place in sky
and world is cold if dry
a fire bright lights the night
and in this embrace all is right
turn again towards this face
the one which sets my heart to race
and lips so close they could not avoid
to close the gap this cold void
and kissing soft and kissing deep
these kisses make heat leap
on every surface of body and skin
a sensual fire burns within
taste the tip of flickering tongue
luxuriate as the pleasure comes
these kisses blending into each other
each kiss leaping pursued by another
where you start and end I cannot say
as we together meld in kissing play
the Sun is gone and fire burning low
but in these kisses shared our loving show
a single embrace holding sweet heat
and light and warmth flows from lips to feet.
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Thoughts in sensual pleasure to erotic writing writ.

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yesmamallthetime 51F  
8960 posts
7/19/2016 4:24 am

Thank you Mulleen for saying that. You inspire me so much with your words. It is like you are creating the poem with me you know.

Stimulate my mind with words of poetry. And my body will follow it's lead...


MulleenofMelb replies on 7/19/2016 5:01 am:
ah if your words from my own sprout
soon they become more devout
heading northward at a rate extreme
words and rhythm and capturing dream.

yesmamallthetime 51F  
8960 posts
7/18/2016 7:39 am

Loving shows in kisses planted
Firmly on lips
Or sloppy and slanted
It matters not
Only that kisses keep landing.
Like a busy airport and its planes
Landing on lanes
With quite the orchestration.

Within this couple
There are songs humming
And words being thought of
Love being chief among them.
Kisses keeping them for
The moment not spoken aloud
But silent.

Will there be time
For words to be heard?
For words to spoken?
Or will time and kisses
Rob them of being voiced?

If loving words be robbed
I would have kissing as the culprit
For at the least, one's heart
One's presence was front and center.
The world and its interference
Not to be mentioned.

Lovely poem Mulleen. So glad to have one of yours to read again.

Stimulate my mind with words of poetry. And my body will follow it's lead...


MulleenofMelb replies on 7/18/2016 10:10 pm:
ah, damn it

your response is significantly better than that to which you reply.

This, succinct, simple, strong, easy to read, brilliant...

Will there be time
For words to be heard?
For words to spoken?
Or will time and kisses
Rob them of being voiced?

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